Asim,A good, well researched attempt.The improvements I would suggest are:- Improve the presentation of your work. Think typography & images. - Rather than a review, include an analysis of an advertisement for each console, considering how it appeals to their target audiencePlease complete this for next Tuesday @ 8pmMr P
Asim,
ReplyDeleteA good, well researched attempt.
The improvements I would suggest are:
- Improve the presentation of your work. Think typography & images.
- Rather than a review, include an analysis of an advertisement for each console, considering how it appeals to their target audience
Please complete this for next Tuesday @ 8pm
Mr P