Unit 2 Edit Workshop Evaluation

Strengths

• Good editing meant that I was able to match all the shots to the sounds
• A good variety of shots were used to show violence which would make it appeal to the target audience
• It gave a clear idea of what the game is about 

Weaknesses

• The male character's mouth wasn't moving when he was supposed to be talking
• The framing of the male character on the phone wasn't very good as he kept falling out of shot
• In the last shot, unexpected light creates a weird effect on the characters in the shot

Improvements

• If there is dialogue, the character's actions must match it
• Some parts are too dark, need to think about where we film